Love Or Sin (Part : 9 Magic Of True Love)

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Shivansh was driving the car in full speed. Tears were constantly falling down from his eyes. The flashes of all the moment which he had spent with him coming in front of his eyes. The biggest fear of his life was coming true. Manik’s life was in danger. He didn’t want to lose him at any cost. He was not only his best friend. He was his life. He wanted to reach hospital as soon as possible and wanted to see him fine in front of his eyes.

Nandini was sitting beside him. She was looking out of the window blankly. After listening about Manik’s accident , Nandini’s mind became completely blank. His smiling face was not leaving her mind for even a single second. She didn’t want to lose him. She had never felt so scared in her life before. She was just praying to god to keep him fine. Her heart was beating fast because of the fear of losing him because she loved him.

They reached hospital with in an hour. That one hour was not less than one year for them. They immediately rushed inside the hospital. Nandini bumped with someone. That person said sorry to her but she without even looking at that person , she ran toward reception.

“Ma.. Ma..nik Malhotra.” Shivansh stammered in taking the name of Manik at reception because of the fear of losing him. Nandini was standing beside him having fear in her eyes. She was also not in condition to speak a single. She just wanted to see him fine.

“He is in ICU , 5th floor sir.” Receptionist checked the list on her computer and told him. As she said , they ran toward the elevator. There were two elevator. He hurriedly pressed the button of both. With in few second, the door of elevator opened and both walked inside. Nandini immediately pressed the button of fifth floor. They both were becoming restless. Tears were constantly falling down from his eyes and he was wiping them off with his palms.

Nandini wasn’t crying. She was completely blank at that moment. She wasn’t understanding that why this was happening with her. The complications of her life were increasing. She had accepted her feeling and was living with it. But then why this happened?

As soon as the door opened , they ran toward the ICU which was on the right side. A nurse walked out and Shivansh ran toward her.

“How.. how is he ?”Shivansh asked worriedly. Nandini was also looking at the nurse worriedly and her heart was racing.

“His condition is critical. We can’t say anything right now.” Nurse left from there after saying this. Shivansh slumped on the floor in agony and started crying , palming his face. Tears started to run down from Nandini’s eyes too. Her heart was crying inside. She didn’t want to lose him. His presence used to give him peace. His one smile was enough to make her day happy. He was the missing peace of her life. She didn’t want to lose that missing piece again.

Nandini cried looking at Shivansh who was crying sitting on floor and his face was covered with his hands. Nandini knelt down beside him. As she put her hand on his shoulder , he turned toward her and hugged her tightly. He started crying more badly and she too cried, rubbing his back.

“I don’t want to lose him Nandini. I don’t..” he said in between his cries. Nandini shut her eyes tightly and cried with him. She also didn’t want to lose him.

“He will be fine.” She started to say these words constantly like a prayer.

“Yes , you are right Nandini. He will be fine. He can’t go living me alone like.. like this. I won’t let him go.” Shivansh uttered after breaking the hug. Nandini slightly nodded her head having tears in her eyes. Then they both stood up wiping their tears.


After sometime Nandini was sitting outside of the ICU , looking straight blankly. Shivansh had gone downstairs to fill some forms. She was feeling like everything was getting end. All the moment which she had spent with him were revolving in her mind. Their first hug , his smile , their conversations , all the moments were coming in front of her like a movie was playing in front of her eyes. There were very less memories of Nandini with Manik but all of them were very precious , special and best for her which she could never forget.

Doctor walked outside from the ICU. Seeing Doctor, Nandini stood up and ran toward him immediately.

“How is he Doctor?” She asked in one go from doctor worriedly and her heartbeat become fast. Instantly her mind started praying to god for a positive answer from doctor.

“We are trying our best. Now also we can’t say anything. He is not responding to our any treatment like he didn’t want to live.” Doctor said making Nandini cry more. She took few steps backward in a shock. Why he didn’t want to live ? What the pain he was hiding ? Now these questions started running in her mind. She had always seen pain in his eyes but she couldn’t able to gather courage to ask from him about his problem.

She had no idea , the pain which she was going through , Manik was also going through the same pain. Pain of not getting what he needed the most. Pain of falling in love with her which was a sin for him. Pain of controlling his feelings. Pain of seeing her every day with somebody else. Pain of living in a guilt after falling in love with his best friend’s wife. The pain was killing him from inside that he didn’t even want to live.

She went near to the door of ICU and looked at him through small glass. Seeing his condition, she cried in agony shutting her eyes and she pursed her lips to control her cries. He was lying on the bed unconscious and many wires were attached to his body. She cried resting her forehead on the door. It was getting difficult for her to see him in worse condition. Her heart was burning inside her.

Next moment she opened the door and walked inside . She couldn’t able to stop herself from seeing him. Luckily there was no one in the ICU at that time and she took the advantage. She walked toward him , taking slow steps. Her both the legs were trembling. Tears were falling down from her eyes constantly. Her heart was racing fast. His condition was making her weak.

She stood beside him and stared him for few minutes without even blinking her eyes. Tears were constantly falling down from her eyes. She moved her hand toward his face. Her hand was shaking and her eyes were crying , seeing him in pain. She had never wished to see him in this condition. She had always wished to see his smile. She had never felt like this seeing somebody in pain before. Her heart was breaking inside. She was feeling like her soul was shivering inside because of the fear of losing him.

“You have to be alright Manik. You don’t even know that what you are for me Manik. You have no idea what you are doing to me. Your small smile make my entire day happy. A small conversation with you make me feel happy. Each and every second I crave to come in your arms. I love you Manik.” She finally realised that she loved him. The fear of losing him made her realise that how much she loved him. She was standing, putting her one hand on his face and tears were constantly falling down from her eyes.

“Yes I love you Manik. I know it’s a sin. And You will never love me back. But I can’t stop my heart from loving you. My heart is only beating for you Manik. On my every breath , your name has written. If something will happen to you , I will also not able to live without you. I can’t live without. I will die Manik without you.” he leaned down toward his face and held his face with her both hands. Then she spoke and cried.

“I know , I will get nothing from this love but my heart will never stop loving you. I will always love you without any expectation. I only want to see you fine and happy in your life. I can’t lose you manik because I love you.” She whispered and cried touching her face with him. As her tears fell on his cheeks, he moved his finger in response. She kept crying, touching her face with his face in agony. It was clearly visible that how much she loved him.

She wasn’t expecting anything from this love. She only want to see him happy. Only his happiness matters to her. Her happiness was in his happiness. His happiness was peace of heart.

“what are you doing here ?” She came on the earth back after listening the famine voice. She instantly stood straight and looked at the person , wiping her tears with the back of her palm.

“Mam No one is allowed to come here. You have to go out.” Nurse spoke and she nodded her in yes. She looked at Manik before walking out. Fresh tears rolled down from her eyes to her cheeks seeing him in pain. She ran outside of the ICU covering her mouth with her hand.

She saw Shivansh who was coming with Doctor sadly and his eyes became red because of crying constantly. Doctor walked inside the ICU and Shivansh slumped down on the bench. He rested his head on the wall and closed his eyes. All the happy and sad moment which he had spent with him , they again started revolving in his mind. He couldn’t imagine his life without him.

Nandini sat down beside him and put her hand on his shoulder. Shivansh looked at her, opening his eyes slowly.

“What happened to my Manik , Nandini ? Doctor is saying that he is not responding to any of their treatment. Why he doesn’t want to live ? What is the pain.. which he is hiding ? Why can’t he share with me ?” Shivansh asked while crying. He was clueless. Nandini also having no answer of his questions. She also had no clue that what was his pain.

Before Nandini could say something to him , they both heard doctor’s voice and they immediately looked at them.

“He is out of danger now. He starts responding.” Shivansh and Nandini smiled , listening doctor’s words. They both took breath of relief. Finally he was out of the danger. In her mind , she started thanking god.

“It’s like some miracle happened. Few minutes ago , he had stopped responding to any of our treatment but when I came back , i found him completely fine. His heartbeats are normal. It was like something had happened” Doctor himself was shocked. He was having no idea that this wasn’t any miracle. This was the magic of Nandini’s true love which made him fine. Her words encouraged him to fight back from his pain. He started responding only because of her. She was the reason that he got fine.

I am ending the part here. Good news, I will try my best to update this story daily.

Just don’t forget to like and leave your comments.

Love Mehak

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  1. Wowww this chapter is so damn beautiful and emotional too😍😭😍😭 The way nandini confessed her love and this is magic of true love as you said ♥️♥️♥️
    I can feel the pain of both Manan just because of your writing skills they are damn damn amazing bro!!
    I think I can never forget this story seriously I didn’t even reach to half and I’m loving it so muchh ♥️♥️♥️♥️
    Thank God actually thank you writer now that manik is fine I’m excited and curious for the next parts
    Loving it😁😘😘

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  2. Oh god 😍

    Well I know this part is very emotional but still I loved it a lot.. I enjoyed this part a lot..☺☺

    In this part we can purely see the love of two friends, in this part we can witness the pain of one sided love.😔

    You wrote every scene, every dialogue, every line so Commendably! 👏👏👏

    I can feel each and every emotions of the characters in this story..

    Keep writing Mehku😍
    I’m loving it.. ❤

    With Lots of Love~

    P.S~ you made my cry so much!😭😭

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  3. the chapter was dam emotional 😭😭
    u wrote this chapter so amazing
    i feel their pain😭😭
    three of them in so pain
    shivansh broke down seen showen that how he love his friends
    his friendship is pure
    when he said he is life 😭😭i feel so sad for him
    his broke down you wrote it so well and emotional
    described his true frndship so osmlly
    nailed it
    i feeling so bad for her man
    jab use pata chalega ki manan ke dusre se pyaar karte use itna hurt hoga 😭😭yeh soch soch kar hi meri jaan jati hai

    now come to nandini pain omg she can’t even share n show her pain infront of anybody
    she is so broke down
    u showen her so osmlly
    i feel her pain with ur writing yaar..
    she just want him alive n happy chaye vo use mile na mil

    finally she confessed that she love him
    that scene is dam emotional n touchy.
    u described that scene so well
    just nailed it…
    nandu broken down in front of manik was dam emotional 😭😭😭
    u killed with ur writing man
    really so so osmlly described every words of nandu

    n manik ne response kiya 😭😭😭 that’s call true love man
    u explained manik pain also well..
    he is not responding to any treatment
    that’s scene mad me emotional
    shivash is shocked that wht pain manik is hiding from for the first time
    he is broken down 😭😭😭😭he love manik so much yaar…
    jab use pata chale that manik ka pain kya hai vo toot jayega…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭manik bhi apne frnd ko hurt nhi karna chahta tabhi jeena bhi nhi chahta hai
    but nandu ki words sun kar he start responding yeh sacha pyaar..
    dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai phir bhi unka pyaar galt hai iss duniya me
    unka pyaar sin hai😭😭😭😭
    mujhe tino ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai yaar 😭😭😭😭😭
    me sochna bhi nhi chahti age kya hoga…
    it’s kills me when ever i think about their future .

    n this part is dam Emotional
    n u nailed it behna…. 😘😘😘

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  4. True love always Do magic kya what will happen with them shivansh still between them and both manan will never hurt him because of their feelings

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  5. Woww mehku this is amazing and it was too painful to see them like this.. i knew it nandini use theek kr degi nd see she did. True love is magical.. it heals us..

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  6. Oh my gosh u r so so bad u love to make us cry dont u 😭😭😭😭
    Why they are suffering so much

    Shivansh is such a pure soul yr kitna pyar karta hai wo manik se
    Manik ko aisi condition mai dekh kar usko jaan nikal rh th
    When he said that manik is his life and everything
    I got so emotional because he loves manik so much

    I always felt so bad whenever I think ki jab shivansh ko pta chalega ki manan ek dusre se pyar karte toh wo kaise react karega
    He will be so heartbroken but I hope wo dono samjhne ki koshish kare

    This chapter was so painful and emotional
    Nandu’s condition was so bad & heartbreaking and the worse part was that she can’t even share her pain with anyone

    When the doc said he is not responding and he doesn’t want to live that was really really emotional
    Manik’s knows he can’t stop loving her ….he can’t cheat his friends …..he can’t even live without her so he was giving up but nandu’s love didn’t let him give up

    Nandu’s confession was pure ….her love is so pure
    She dosen’t want anything return she just wants to love him
    That shit was so painful …my heart is hurting so much for them because teeno ye sab kuch deserve ni krte

    They deserve only love and happiness
    U write so beautifully yr
    U makes us feel all emotions which they are going through

    Lots of love
    Simran ❤❤❤❤

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  7. I was an amazing update.. N i hope she realizes that she gave him the new life😍😍…..i want them to be together… But on the same side I don’t want shivansh getting hurt😬😬😬

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  8. Miku dekho mujhe mil gaya actually I found you as your name but maine phir se video dekha then I find your username name that is mehaklovely then I find you it was amazing ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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  9. I loved this part hope manik is fine and be back to normal and what u said is true it is nandini magic which made him fight for his life hope shivansh will be back to normal as manik is fine 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 lovely update 😁😁😁😁😁 I love ur story so much I am a big fan of ur storys 😁😀😃🤗😌

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  10. Awesome update
    Shivash condition shows his true frndship .he loves manik like a mother loves her son thats what what i thought when i this

    And about nandini the most painful thing she knows she loves him but cant tell him or anyone and her love is in icu i think the pain will be unbearable

    Manik he responding to nandini s words tell that he loves her so much

    Totally u have awesomely portrayed the true loves emotions loved it so much lots of love .take care

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  11. First of I’m very happy for this All the best for your new journey Meri Sweetu Tweetu 😍❤
    Nd thank u for this update ❤❤❤

    Phew!!!! So good to catch up with this story.. U know I just hold myself back nd wait patiently till I have ample time and mood to read your story, so i can completely savour n enjoyed it to the fullest.. And I’m never DISAPPOINTED..

    God what a roller coaster ride again, Shivansh sach me true friend hai manik ka he’s such a Sweet heart.. Shivansh ki condition dekh kar i truly hurt shiv manik ko bhut pyar karta hai, issi true friendship ki wajah se manik nandini se dur chala gya..
    Nd Nandini Finally usne apna love confessed kar diya Manik se I can’t believe Truly said Pyar me bhut taqat hoti hai.. Nandini ke pure Confession ne Manik ko Maut se khich kar le aaya.. I’m very happy Hey I’m not surprised by nandini’s reaction at all 😍
    I know nandini kya feel kar rhi hai manik ki condition ko dekh kar n manik bhi vo hi pain se guzar raha hai nandini jis pain se tm guzar rahi ho.. Both suffered same feeling n same Pain but koi nai hai iss feeling ko n pain ko kam karne wala coz vo sochte hai ye sin hai but Mai proudly bol skti hu This is True Love.. Manik Jeena nai chahta but Ye Nandini ka true love hi hai Jo Manik ko jeene par Mazboor kar diya.. Nd shivansh u shows your true friendship nd tm soch rhe manik ki condition n sudden miracle ye nandini ka love hai shivansh nd tm soch rhe manik kya hide kar rha hai..
    Vo itni jaldi tmhe nai pta chalega shivansh.. Nd u shows how truly u loves manik..
    Words will fall shorts and will not make justice to what u have written..
    You are gifted with amazingly writing skills.. ❤❤❤
    The way u describe each scene is like A movie playing in front of my eyes😍😍
    I’m happy ki manik ko kuch nai hua n nandini ne apna love bhi confessed kar diya bss Writer jii Mere manik n nandini ko mila dete hai 😂
    I know it’s impossible nandini shivansh ki wife hai but vo Manik se pyar karti hai ye bhi ek kadwa sach hai.. But Jo bhi ho I’m impatiently waiting.. ❤
    Nd literally miss kar rhi hu Inline comments karna 😣
    As always loved this chapter n as always waiting for your next chapter with Impatiently ❤❤

    Love Yaaa 😘😘😘😘
    Gudiya 😍😘

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  12. Hey, Hi!!😊 please make shivansh see what happened around him,& also make him realize that manik & nandini loves each other madly please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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  13. Pyaar woh aag hain jise bhagwan bhi alag nahin kar sakta air nahin koi bandh kar sakta air aaj ka update iski gawahi deti hain good work keep it up @mehaklovely

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  14. Truly said 😍
    only Love has the power to make miracles happen💕💕😍
    The bread down of shivay shows true frndship …. how much he loves manik..😍😍nandini s breakdown😍😍perfect title to the chptr😍😍
    Lovely update 😘😘

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