Love Or Sin (Part : 16 The Unexpected Night)

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Manik was just about to gulp down another glass of scotch, but his hand stopped in the midway as suddenly his heartbeat accelerated. He immediately understood that the girl whom he loved, she was around him. He put the glass back and tried to compose himself by clenching his fist and shutting his eyes. He had been yearning to see her from more than a month. That’s why he couldn’t stop himself from turning around and look at her.

His heart stopped beating as his eyes fell over her. She was stepping into the party hall with Shivansh. She was looking breathtakingly gorgeous in that black saree. In the whole party, only this girl had the power to accelerate the heartbeat of the world-famous business tycoon, The Manik Malhotra. Tears welled up in his eyes as he looked at her face which had become pale. She had a small smile on her face, through which she was trying to hide her all pain. She could hide her pain from the whole world behind her smile and makeup but not from Manik. He could read her eyes which were only filled with pain.

The way Manik had felt her presence without even looking at her, in the same Nandini also felt his presence. Her eyes were searching for him in the whole party desperately. Shivansh’s business partners were coming with their wives and meeting them. She was just passing them smile while her desperate eyes were searching for him. She was feeling like her heart would be exploded. Finally, her eyes stopped over him. As she looked at him, he turned his face and looked on the other side. She was seeing him after so many days. She was gazing at him without caring about anything. She felt like she got his breath back after seeing him. She wanted to freeze the moment here and wanted to keep gazing at him like this. She was happy to see him fine and at that moment also, she didn’t forget to say thank you to god for making him fit and fine.

“Manik.” As Shivansh shouted, waving his hand at Manik, Nandini came back on the earth and Manik looked at him instantly and smiled. Now Nandini was looking everywhere except Manik.

“Let’s go,” as Shivansh placed his hand on her back and Manik looked away instantly. Manik used to feel hurt when Shivansh used to touch Nandini in front of his eyes. He had no right on her but still, he couldn’t control himself from getting jealous. Jealousy is the part of love only. If there is love then jealousy will be also there.

“Shivansh, I need to use the washroom. You go and I will join you both later on.” Nandini gave an excuse because she was not ready to face Manik at that time. She needed a few minutes to compose herself. Shivansh nodded at her and removed his hand from her bareback. He left to meet Manik and she went to use the washroom.

“How are you Manik?” Shivansh asked hugging him. He hugged him back, having a smile on his face.

“You can see yourself how I am,” Manik spoke happily after breaking the hug. Shivansh was happy to see him fit and fine, but he knew, Manik was broken from inside.

“Let’s have some drink,” Manik patted his back. He just nodded his head giving him faint smile.

“I just can’t face, Manik. I can’t control my feelings in front of him anymore. I don’t want him to know, that what I feel for him. I don’t want to increase the complications. I have to leave the party venue as soon as possible. Yes, this is right.” Nandini was crying standing in front of a huge mirror. Luckily nobody was in the washroom at that time. She turned to walk wiping her tears but stopped listening to her mind.

“When you will learn to face your problems? Running from your problems is not the solution. Face them and come out them with the flying colours. You have to face Manik.” Her mind encouraged her to face Manik.

“I have to face him.” She murmured these words three times to encourage herself. Then she stepped out of the washroom after taking a deep breath.

She reached in the hall, her eyes were finding Manik and Shivansh. First, she looked at the bar counter but they were not there. She found them standing in the corner of the hall. They were talking to each other like nobody was there at the party except them. Nandini used to get some kind of peace seeing their strong bond of friendship. She sauntered over them and stood behind them.

“Hi, Manik.” She was trying to be normal and happy. Manik froze on his place as he heard his name from her mouth. Her voice was so pleasant and gave some kind of peace to his soul. He turned around to face her and found her smiling at them.

“I am completely fine,” Manik answered and she just smiled in response.

“So when are you joining back to your office ?” She asked, raising her eyebrows. Manik was shocked to see her behaving so normal with him.

“He has already joined the office, Nandini. Work is very important for Manik.” Shivansh answered to Nandini’s question, holding Manik from his shoulder. She made O mouth.

Shivansh looked at the door and smiled finding a girl entering into the party hall. She was wearing a black hot dress with blank heals. Her brown hair was open falling on her back. She was looking gorgeous. All men were drooling at her.

“Nandini, can we dance together tonight? Look all the couples are dancing.” As Shivansh suddenly asked from Nandini, holding her hand, she looked at him in shock because he had never asked her to dance with him like this.

“Let’s go.” He pulled her closer to himself. She nodded her head confusingly. Manik was also confused, seeing Shivansh’s behaviour.

“Tanya is already here, Manik. Don’t forget to join us on the dance floor with Tanya. All the best.” Shivansh whispered in Manik’s ear and Nandini was looking at them confusingly. Then he left with Nandini winking at him.

“Shivansh what’s going on ?” Nandini asked from Shivansh raising her eyebrows when they reached on the dance floor.

“Dance…” He yanked her to himself by grabbing her waist. Nandini was looking at him shockingly and her hands were on his chest. Their proximity was making her feel uncomfortable.

“I want Manik to spend some time with Tanya.”Shivansh held her one hand and they moved their leg to and fro with the rhythm of the music. He told her making her looked at him confusingly.

“Tanya… who is Tanya?” Nandini asked bemusedly.

“Tanya was our classmate. Manik was her crush. Tanya is my friend too. In short, I am trying to do their setting.” He twirled Nandini, holding her hand. She felt a stabbing pain in her chest. She couldn’t see Manik with another girl. Shivansh was dancing holding her hands from behind while Nandini’s eyes were finding Manik restlessly. Tears brimmed in her eyes as she saw him talking to Tanya.

“Nandini, I just come.” Shivansh went to attend the important call, leaving Nandini alone. She stood in the corner of the party hall. She was staring at Manik and Tanya, having tears in her eyes. Her heart was crying seeing them. She was trying to compose herself but couldn’t.

“Nandini…” she immediately wiped off her eyes as she heard Shivansh’s voice from behind. She turned around to look at him after composing herself.

“I have to leave for Pune in few hours, so I am going back home. You be here.” Shivansh told her, holding her from her shoulders.

“And tell Manik also after he gets free,” Shivansh spoke, grinning at Manik. Nandini didn’t look at them.

“Actually I don’t want to disturb them.” He looked at Nandini and she just nodded her head.

“Now bye Nandini and take care of yourself.” He kissed her forehead after cupping her face. He left from there last time glancing at Manik.

Nandini burned in jealousy as she looked at Manik and Tanya. Tanya was laughing putting her one hand on Manik’s chest. Their closeness was hurting her. She couldn’t control her emotions and her eyes became moist. She rushed from there.

“Tanya, I just come.” As Manik saw her running somewhere, he went behind her after excusing himself.

Nandini dashed into one room and started crying in agony leaning against the wall. The room was dark and cold. Manik was listening to her sobs, standing outside of the door. He closed his eyes dejectedly, feeling intense pain in his heart.

“Why are you doing this with me, God? What is my mistake? Marrying the man of my parents’ choice, was that my mistake? I also want to be happy in my life. I am just tired of pretending that I am happy with my husband. I want the freedom to love. I want to be happy. I love, Manik and my heart burns when I see him with… with another girl. I don’t know why I love him. I just only know one thing that I really love him. Please, God, show me the right path, I am just… tired of everything.” She was complaining to god while crying badly. Manik couldn’t see her in this condition and he walked inside.

“Nandini…” he switched on the light. The switchboard was just beside the door. Listening to Manik’s voice, she immediately wiped off her tears with her hands and composed herself by taking a deep breath.

“What are you doing here and where is Shivansh?” Manik asked, strolling towards her and his gaze was fixed at her moist eyes which were clearly telling him that how much pain she was hiding in her those beautiful eyes.

“I… I was feeling suffocation in the party, therefore, I came here.” She lied to him and also told him about Shivansh. Manik just nodded his head. He was about to speak something but the sound of closing of the door startled them. Both rushed toward the door after giving each other shocking look.

Nandini stumbled on the box and just about to fall but Manik caught her in his muscular arms on right time. She hid her face in his chest, clutching the collar of his coat tightly. She got scared a lot. He was just gazing at her without even blinking his eyes. His one hand was at her bareback and other was at her waist. He was safely holding her in his warm arms. Nandini calmed down immediately in his arms where she felt secure and safe. His touch was giving peace to her heart and soul. She wanted him to store her in his arms forever.

She gazed at him with her eyes filled with pain and love. Nandini was looking deeply into his eyes and trying to read them. She was trying to know what the truth he was hiding in his eyes and behind his smile. Few strands of hair which were coming in her eyes, he tucked them behind her ear, gazing at her beautiful face and she closed her eyes in response. He got completely lost in her forgetting about everything. Both of their hearts were thumping because of their proximity. Nandini was shivering badly in his arms because of the temperature of the room.

Manik made her stand straight and asked from her concernedly, “Nandini are you okay ?” She remained silent.

“You are shivering.” He whispered, narrowing his brows in confusion as he held her shoulders.

“Why there is so cold here ?” He asked from himself looking around and he came to know they were in the cold storage room. In the corners of the room, vegetables were kept in the boxes.

“Oh shit. We need to get out of here immediately. This is a cold storage room.” As he freaked out, she also looked around.

“Now what… what we will do.. ?” She asked getting afraid because she was already shivering.

“You wear this.” Manik pulled out his coat and helped her in wearing the coat. Nandini tried to stop him but he didn’t listen to her. Nandini felt good to be in his coat. She felt like he was hugging her, and she could smell his fragrance from his coat, a smile touched her face.

As he moved his eyes at her, she instantly hid her smile.

“Don’t worry, we will be out from here soon.” He assured her, cupping her face and blinked his eyes. She nodded at him slightly in response. She was falling in love with him more and more.

“Damn it, the network is not coming,” Manik shrieked in anger as he saw that there was no service written on his phone’s screen. Nandini’s breath got stuck in her throat after listening to this. She stared at Manik with her eyes filled with fear.

“Somebody please help us. We are stuck inside.” Nandini went toward the door. She started banging the door and yelling for help while Manik was trying to catch the network of the phone by going at every corner of the room.

Both were standing at the opposite side. “What we will do now ?” Nandini uttered, staring at Manik and her voice was filled with fear. Manik was looking at her helplessly, having no rescue plan in his mind.


So What do you think, what will happen next ?

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Love Mehak

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  1. It wad really unexpected night 😍😂
    All of them are suffering so muchh😭😭😭😭 Even shivansh is suffering though he don’t know about manan’s Love towards each other but the day he ll get to know I don’t know what’s gonna happen 😒😒

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  2. Kitna rulaayegi.. btaa de aaj tu..

    You know what i actually felt their pain.. their pain of separation.. their pain of putting up a facade of ‘ohh yess I’m so happy’. And it’s so upsetting that they love each other but they can’t confess saath rehna yoh duur.

    Seeing them like this breaking every moment is so heartbreaking.. and on the other hand i feel bad for shivaansh too. He is such a wonderful friend and an amazing friend. But he’ll be broken too jab usey sach pata chalega. I wanted to hate the third person but in your story i seriously cant because the characterization of shivaansh its so good so beautiful that u can’t blame or hate him. And this is the irony kf their situation. Whatever is happening it’s no one’s fault. It’s just the circumstances which are leading them.

    If MaNan would’ve met earlier they wouldn’t have been in so much pain and three people wouldn’t have to br hurted just for loving the other person. Everything would have been so sorted. But this is what life is everything so messed up. I just wish no one gets hurt 😓😓

    Ab yeh tanya kaun hai bhaai yeh kaha se aagayi.. poor nandu kaise dekh rhi h yeh sab. She’s so hurt 😭 manik why you have to talk to tanya itta hass hass ke.. don’t you love nandu?.😓🙄🙄

    Ohh freaking hell cold storage me lock ohh fuck. But mehku mujhe aisa kyu lag rha h ki yhaa cold storage mein kuch hot hone vaala hai 😛😛😍😍🤣🤣🤣

    Loved the update

    Lots of love

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    • Haha.. haan hot hi hoga🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭. And finally tune padh liya💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻. Love you a lot shivi baby❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍🙈🙈🙈😍😍


  3. Amazing update waise sabhi updates super wala he hota hain….they are jealous jab nandu ko shivansh hold kiya tha tab manik nd jab tanya manik k sath dance kar rahi tab nandu…manan ek sath rehne k liye kitha tadap rahe hain but reh nhi pa rahe..manan ek dusre ko bina dekhe v ek dusre ko mehsush kar sakte hain because unka love bohot pure hain ek duje k liye…jab shivansh nandu k sath dance kar raha tha tab woh kitna uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi q ke woh usse pyar nhi karti..aur jab Manik Tanya k sath dance kar raha tha tab Nandu ko bohot hurt hua q k woh manik ko kisi aur k sath nhi dekh sakti isiliye woh waha chali jati hain nandu k piche manik v chala jata hain aur nandu ka rona sun leta hain nandu ka rona rokne k liye room me jata hain aur dono room lock ho jate hain….aabbb kya hoga there is no network nd shivansh v nhi hain party me usse v jyada important manan ek sath wo v bandh kamre me..very excited loved this update

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  4. Oh my gosh the chapter was so amazing specially the ending
    It made me so excited and nervous

    I just feels so bad seeing them like this….. My heart cries for them
    They want to be with each other so badly but they are so helpless

    I know I know shivansh is very good and blah blah blah
    But Can’t we just kill him yr ek baar mai prblm hi solve jo jaega 😂😂😂
    Dono ro le lege kuch time tak but fir sath bhi toh ho hi jaega na
    It’s a bad idea but I really wanna do this 😂😂😂😂😂

    Nandu is trying to hard man to be strong infront of manik
    Kitni koshish karti hai apne pain ko hide karne ki. But usse kya pta ki wo kisi se bhi apna pain chupa skti hai but manik se ni
    Manik can easily read her eyes❤

    Aaj meko shivaansh Par bht gussa aaya mtlb hai kya zarurt hai manik ki setting karane ki Tanya chudail se

    Huh pta ni kaisi ladki hogi
    Achi bhi hogi ya ni isko bolo match maker na bnne
    Kuch krna hi hai wo sanyas le le and manik ko force kare nandu se shaadi karne ko 😂
    Hum bhi khush ho jaega and wo bhi
    Sab apni life aaram se jeeyege fir bina kisi prblms ke

    He did wrong usse aise nandu ko akele ni chodd kr jana chahiye th party mai
    Atleast usse ghar toh drop krna chahiye
    Sometimes this guy really irritates me a lot
    Mtlb koi aisa krta hai kya apni biwi ko party mai akela chodd kar chala jata hai
    Did he actually love nandu or is it just infatuation and he thinks he loves her

    My heart was paining so much for nandu jab wo apne pain ke bare mai bta rh th 💔💔
    Why god is doing this with her or manik
    Kitna pain De rh hai bhagwan dono ko…… Har waqt bechare dono dheere dheere karke Mar rh hai
    I can’t see my manan like this it’s hurts so much

    Hayyee ending scene made me so excited
    Dono akele cold storage room mai
    I am super excited to see kya hoga 😍😍😍
    Bs aisa kuch na jiski wajah se dono baad mai kuch regret kare

    Simi ❤

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  5. Jealousy is needed for love and I loved the way u explained about the jealousy
    What will happen next is that they will get stuck in the cold storage for sometime and have some romance maybe nandini is going to propose manik 🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘 I am correct or am I correct 😉😉😉😉


  6. Just Awesome Update 😍 U Writings Skills Has My Heart❤ And Update I Am Desperate To Know What’s Next😁🙈 Kyuki Mujhe Thode To Hint Hai Kya Hoga😂

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  7. Awww baby this is best.. i am feeling so glad to have a reader and friend like you. Like manik and Shivansh, our friendship is like this ❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍 ab khudh smajha.. what you are to me.. meri gudiya.. love you a lot😙😙😙😙😙😜😙🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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  8. Aaaaannnnnnnnddddddd I’m Back!!!! I mean Manik is back!!! No no sorry Meri Sweetu is Back!!! Na na The Awesomeness is backk!! Grr…. You know what Sweetu, Chuck it! 🤣 Good news is, You are back nd Finally I’m back! 😂😂

    I’m 2 days late.. 2 DAYS LATE..!! BAH!! But then, better late than never right?? Okay Okay enough of my Bakwaas now coming to u nd MaNan 😍😍..
    I guess I should shut up and just talk about the chapter… *Stupid Clumsy Me* *Sheepish* *Holds tongue between teeth in Embarrassment* 😂😂🙈🙈

    Oh Damn!!! 😂😂😂😂

    I loved Cliffhanger nd ur queen of Cliffhanger 😂😂😂

    You’re the best writer who writes boy’s characters so beautifully, Vo manik ho ya Shivansh.. I am not talking about manik’s attitude or Style.. It just DAT I can imagine him, feel him, his pain, his guilty, saw the change occurring due to “LOVE”..
    Journey of “LOVE OR SIN” Characters is going perfectly..!!! Just because of Pure, innocent Feelings of Nandini..#MaNan r just Magical..
    The way u write Sweet, Caring, Loving, Humble, nd extra sweet shivansh Character i toh love with him but Manik se jyada nai, He’s Mine 🙈😂

    Dese 4-5 chapters are my favorites chapters.. Beautiful Update..
    Its quite long update.. Loved Loved Loved it… The way u write it so effortlessly wants me want to read more n more!!!
    I can’t tell u how much ur updates makes me happy.. This is really an “AWESOME” One.. ❤❤❤❤

    The love between Manik n Nandini is pure bliss.. I seriously loved their chemistry!! Inki chemistry me Aag hai.. Jo ek mere presence se attract hote hai..
    I just loved it when Manik felt Nandini’s presence.. I can feel their pain nd koi kaise ek dusre se itna pyar kar skta hai..Manik nandini se endless love karta hai..
    Nandini ki ek presence manik ko restless kar diya n he knows nandini ke smile ke piche ka pain.. But the best part is manik understand nandini’s pain really well..

    The best part is Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hui hai 🙈
    Nandini bhi only manik ko search kar rhi hai.. Nd the way nandini manik ko stare kar rhi lag rha hug na kar le sabke samne 🙈🙈🙈
    Manik kab tak suffer karega.. I know shivansh husband hai but Manik hurt ho rha mera i can’t see him like this 😭😭
    Jealousy common hai manik kaise control kar rha hai 😭😭
    Manik n nandini feel free type pretend kar rhe hai 😣
    Ohh god inka pain kab ease hoga 😑😑
    They both know each other feeling really well ye nandini ki restlessness n her face is like an open book to him… Manik Pain easily uski eyes me dekh leta hai 😓😓

    Nandini my poor girl.. Sad part both were so restless to meet each other and got disappointed 🤦‍♀
    It was like they were playing hide n seek.. Nandini n manik both are so much upset..
    Poor girl n her unbearable pain 😭😭
    God It is a deeper feeling than love.. Love is just a mere word to what they feel for each other 😔😔

    Nandini ne khud ko encourage toh kar liya but kya dur reh payegi manik se.. They both interact each other so well.. Manik shocked hai nandini ke behavior se but i am feeling so happy, excited n the list goes on and on.. I loved nandini’s confidence usne manik se normal baat ki..

    Poor shivansh usko itna bhi nai pta hai uski wife uske touch se comfortable nai hai toh dance kya karegi.. But i have a question shivansh itna love krta hai toh usse nai show hota nandini ka pain (>_<)..
    I know he is a true buddy n uske intention manik ko happy dekhna hai.. But isse manik nandini suffer alot..
    Who is this Tanya Kabab me haddi mere manan ke beech 🤦‍♀🤦‍♀
    I hope tanya prblm na create kare…
    Ufff ye jealousy sab ruin kar deti hai.. Her pain n manik ko kisi or ke sth dekhna just unbearable 😣😣
    Nandini's afraid to live without manik.. That thought scared me alot 😔

    Like finally shivansh gya.. This scene n I'm very happy.. Manik n nandini ko Alone time spend karne ko milega 😍
    Nd hesitation n prblm decrease ho jaye…

    Feeling really bad for nandini n her jealousy.. I know jealousy right hai.. Jiisse love karte hai unko third person ke sth nai dekh skte 😣😣
    Nd bitch tanya kuch jyada hi manik ke close ho rhi hai 🤦‍♀🤦‍♀
    My poor girl suffering so much… Pta nai kb usse peace milegi.. Ye guilt n pain kb tak bear karegi 😭😭
    U know nandini right path hai manik ko choose karna 😂😂
    Coz god ne tm dono ko ek dusre ke liye bnaya hai.. Destiny bhi tmko saath dekhna chahti hai 😍😍

    Manik nandini ko pain me nai dekh skta 😭😭
    Nandini sochti hai vo apna pain manik se hide kar legi but no she was wrong.. Manik uski eyes me pain dekh leta hai..

    Last scene 😍😍😍
    They r stuck in cold Room n i am waiting to see what will happen now when they both will locked cold room 🙈🙈

    Nandini control I know manik ke paas jaane par peace milta hai.. Haaye that moment 😍😍
    Dis is so serene n my stomach just did a somersault 😍😍🙈🙈 My babies 🙈🙈
    So in love.. *Sigh*

    Nandini jo tm find kar rhi manik ki eyes me vo tmhare liye love hai kb pta chalega tmko 😑😑
    Haayeee beautiful nandini manik ek sth itna lost na ho jaye kahi manik kiss na kar le 😂😂😂 Jokes Apart 🙈🙈😂😂

    Finally mai chahti thi mere MaNan ko alone time mile vo mil gya.. But cold storage room.. Interesting 😜
    Manik is such a Gentleman nandini tmhe toh pyar hai hi manik se mujhe bhi aaj or jyada pyar ho gya 😍😍😂😂
    So so beautiful apna coat de diya 🙈
    Nd nandini ur lucky 😉😉
    God chahte hai aaj dono room me raho but cold storage room 🙄 nd network bhi nai aa rha.. Hope so nikal jayenge waha se..

    Last scene gives me Goosebumps 😍🙈
    Hope everything will be fine.. Kuch nai nandini fear kyu god par trust rakho sab thk hoga everything will be fine.. 😊😊
    Let's hope for best 😍
    You are such a amazing writer.. How effortlessly you build up scenes is commendable.. Nothing unstructured, nothing unnecessary.. Sincere appreciation your way..
    My mind has restrained me for working on anything else before I am done with this beautiful part..Thanks for giving us such a Wonderful read… Wants to read more 🤪

    Manik n nandini are LOVE 😭😍❤

    Now I'll be waiting for ur next part counting days.. So do hurry up wid the next part 😁😁😁

    Nd lastly I have limited words in my dictionary to describe how beautifully u write..
    Just keep writing like this..
    God bless u.. ❤❤

    Love u so much..
    Gudiya 💋❤

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  9. Whattttt??? No yaar seriously Finished😔😔… M so so sad now I am sure I’ll not be able to sleep even Kya yaar Di 😖😖… By the way kya Cliffhanger tha Naa 😄

    But anyway What a Chapter ☺ Do I need to tell No right coz u know that What a Chapter it was 😉😉…

    I just Loved it when Manik felt Nandini’s presence and how they both Love each other so so much.. 😘😘..

    And now who is this idiot Tanya well that’s my name so I’ll not say any further bad words for her but I hope She will not create any kind of burden between MaNan..😍😍

    And then Shivansh exit yeeeeeeeee am so happy 😁😁😁😁 Like for some time only No worries I hope till then MaNan comes on track 😍😍..

    And then Nandini yaar how she must be feeling I can’t even imagine like really poor girl 😭😭.. And m glad that Manik came there hayee and that Moment of theirs awwwwwwwdorable 😘😘😘😘..

    Lastly now They are stuck in that Room and wowwww m so so excited yaar like now it will be so much of fun…

    But a complaint that this chapter finished so so soooo soon Naa 😚 but it’s ok I know that this wait will worth 💕💕💕…

    All in all The whole chapter was amazingly awesomess… 😘😘😍😍😘😍😘😍…

    Thanks for the beautiful chapter di..😍


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  10. Flawlessly penned down 😘

    Can’t describe how amazing this chptr was…. each and every emotion whether pain , jealousy, love 💖 was so beautifully described by u

    Now this moment will take an unexpected turn in their life❤️
    Well I trust u 💖💖u will surely make the storyline amazing 😇😇

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  11. Awesome update.

    Jealousy ,guilty,pain ,happiness

    U have pinned down every emotion so so good that its feels like watching it in front of my eyes i can feel their pain by ur writing.ur making more attached to the characters by your amazing writing skills.

    Totally loved it .

    Lots of love .take care .and yeah waiting to see what will happend next

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