Love Story ( Part : 66 Surprises)

Malhotra family were having breakfast at the dining table with lots of chit chat. Manan were passing each other smile and holding each other hands under the table. Like always Muskan was talking nonstop and making everybody laugh loudly. Nandini was so happy to become the part of so lovable family and Manik was happiest seeing his angel happy. He had never thought that he would ever get a girl like Nandini who would love his family instead of their bank balance.

“Bhabhi.. did you like sleeping in the arms of Mukti yesterday thinking that you were sleeping in the arms of bhai ?” Cabir said catching everybody’s attention. Nandini widened her eyes listening his words while Mukti was glaring at Cabir , she had asked him to keep his mouth shut last night. Everybody were looking at him confusingly including Manik.

“Last night Bhabhi hugged Mukti and said , Manik , how did you become so skinny ?” Everybody laughed and Manik was also laughing looking at Nandini. She was feeling embarrassed and playing with her fingers. Her eye were looking down.

“Why didn’t you tell me before ?” He asked after coming close to her ear. She looked at him through her eyelashes and he raised his eyebrows. She made cute pout and he chuckled.

“Cabir stop teasing Nandini every time.” Neyonika scolded Cabir while twisting his ear. Now everybody were laughing looking at them.

“Mom , Ahaa.. it’s hurting.” Cabir cried in pain.

“Dadi , vely good. Cabil Chachu ne kal musu ko chocolate ni di thi. Aap chachu ko punish kalo.( Dadi very good. Yesterday Cabir Chachu didn’t give me chocolate , he deserves punishment.)” Everybody laughed loudly on Muskan’s words including Nandini. She was sitting on chair in between her parents.


“Manik were do you taking me?” Manik was taking Nandini somewhere covering her eyes with his palms.

“It’s a surprise angel. I can’t tell.” She made a cute pout and said okay. He just smiled.

“I am removing my hands but keep your eyes close.” They reached in front of a room and he said before removing his hands.

“Do it fast , I just can’t wait anymore.” She said getting desperate and he chuckled removing his hands. Then he opened the door and took her inside holding her hand.

“Now you can open your eyes, my love.” He stood beside her and whispered in her ear after turning on the light. She slowly opened her eyes and blinked it two times to adjust in light. Her eyes shot up in a shock seeing the room. Manik was just smiling looking at her.

She was feeling like she was standing in her room. From the wall colour to the colour of bed , everything was exactly same as her room. From small to big everything was same. She looked at Manik surprisingly.

“When did you do this ?” She asked in a disbelief tone. This surprise was really unexpectedly for her.

“When you said yes to marry me.”

“I don’t want you to feel lonely here , I don’t want you to miss anything and become sad. I really don’t like sadness on your face. I can do anything to bring smile on your beautiful face angel. Your happiness is only motive of my life.” He cupped her face and said through the core of his heart. Nandini was just looking at him disbelievingly.


“Until you are with me , I can never feel lonely.” She spoke putting her hand on his hand which was on her face. Both passed each other a smile.

“Every time you do something unexpected. You are spoiling me with your love , Mr. Manik Malhotra.” She spoke and both chuckled.

“But Manik , I want that our room should be fusion of our choice.” Manik saw the glint of excitement in her eyes when she was telling him what she wanted.

“Great Idea but we are going to live in this room until our room is fully constructed , Okay?” He asked raising his eyebrows.

“Okay Mr. Malhotra. But seriously , I am still surprised to see this room. This room is exactly same as mine room.” She walked toward the bed and spoke looking around the room. He walked toward her and stood behind her. He pulled her closer to himself after wrapping his one hand around her waist from behind. Nandini’s heartbeat became fast and she started breathing heavily. His front was touching her back and burning her body. His erection was touching her and turning her on.

“Hold your breath and get ready for the second surprise my wify.” He whispered in her ear and bit her earlobe. She closed her eyes in response.

“But before that I want.. this.” He turned her face toward himself with his free hand , both looked into each other eyes and he captured her lips. She turned toward him while kissing him and encircled her arms around his neck. He wrapped his both hands around her waist and pulled her closer to himself. After a minute , they passed each other smile breaking the kiss only for few seconds. They again started kissing each other lips passionately. His tongue was exploring every corner of her mouth and his hands were moving shamelessly all over her body. She was completely lost in that magical kiss. Like always, he took her in the heaven with his touch.


“Mumma, mujhe mela bunty chayie. ( Mumma I want my Bunty.)” Muskan was sitting on floor and crying for her soft toy from half an hour which she had left in hotel.

“Musu , we will buy new one. Stop crying please.” Zoya was siting in front of her and wiping her tears. She was trying to make her understand but she wasn’t listening to her.

“Mumma , new wala.. mela bunty thodhi na hoga. Nhi.. mujhe sirf bunty chayie. (Mumma , new one will be not my bunty. No , I only want my bunty.)” she said stubbornly and turned her face to another side. Zoya was looking at her worriedly. She thought to call Adi because only a stubborn father can make his stubborn daughter understand.

“Musu , Mumma is going to eat chocolate Ice cream.” Zoya spoke while getting up from floor. Muskan instantly looked at Zoya and her mouth became watery after listening the name of her favourite Ice Cream.

“Don’t you want to eat ?” She asked raising her eyebrows while Muskan licked her lower lip thinking about the Ice Cream. Zoya smiled seeing her daughter’s cute antics. She couldn’t see her musu sad.

“But mumma , chocolate ice cleam toh bunty ki falvate thi.(But Mumma , Chocolate was bunty’s favourite too.)” she spoke sadly and made her mother also upset.

“Jab tak bunty nhi aajata mein chocolate Ice Cream nhi kaungi. (Until Bunty won’t come , I will not eat chocolate Ice Cream.)” Muskan ran outside and Zoya went behind her while calling her.


Manik led her to another room which was simple , not so classy. Nandini looked at the room and then toward him confusingly. She was not understanding that why he took her in this room.

“Look there.” He said pointing his finger toward a photo frame which was kept beside the bed on table. Nandini looked there and saw the photo of her with his father. But she was still confused.

“This is Ram’s uncle room. I mean.. dad’s room. He is going to live with us.” Manik told her and her eyes shot up in a shock.

“What ? Really ? You are kidding, right ?” She couldn’t able to believe that her father was going to live with her only. This was her biggest tension that how would her dad manage everything alone.

“This is true. I am not kidding, Angel. He will be shifted here in the evening.” Manik spoke holding her arms and looking into her eyes.

“But how did you make him agree for this ?” She asked shockingly because making him agree to leave his own house was impossible.

“I am Manik Malhotra, I can do anything.” Manik said in full attitude making her smile.

“Do you remember , when I was talking on phone and you heard me saying that I am marrying Nandini because I love you. You misunderstood everything and then I told you it was your father. That time I was making him agree to live with us. It was really difficult to make your father agree for this.” He huffed wiping the fake sweat from his forehead.

Nandini was just smiling broadly having happy tears in her eyes. She was so happy. Manik took away the biggest tension of her life like a magic. She was falling in love with him more and more with time.

“ Angel , now why are you crying ?” He asked wiping her tears of happiness with his thumbs. She just hugged him tightly burying her face in his chest. Manik instantly hugged him back wrapping his hands around her.

“I love you so much Manik. Every time , you make me fall in love with you more. You are doing so much for me. Thank you so much.” She thanked him hugging him so tightly.

“You know.. this was my biggest tension that who would take care of daddy after I would get marry to you. I am so happy Manik. Thank you so much. Like always you did your magic and took away my all tension. You are best.” She spoke cheerfully after breaking the hug and kissed his cheeks happily after standing on her toes. Manik did all this for her happiness and now he was so happy to see her eyes which were shining with the happiness.

“Thank me properly at night.” He said pulling her toward himself grabbing her arms. She blushed looking down because she understood what he wanted from her. He was smirking at her.

“Mr. Naughty Manik Malhotra.” She spoke and both chuckled.

“And I love my naughty hubby.” She spoke encircling her arms around his neck.

“And I love my angel more when she blush.” He leaned down and whispered near to her lips. Their lips were just about to meet but they pulled apart listening the ringtone of his phone.

“Damn.. this phone.” Manik cursed the phone taking it out from his pocket and she chuckled.

“I will thank you properly at night Mr. naughty Malhotra. Bye…” She walked out from the room winking at him. He smiled looking at her. He put the phone on his ear and his expression got changed.

“The press conference is after two hours , Sir.” His P.A. told her from another side and he cut the phone saying okay. The press conference was kept to clear the mess which had been created by the producer.

“Should I tell about this to Nandini ?”Manik was confused that he should tell Nandini or not. His weakness was his sadness and he knew when she would come to know about all this , she would become upset.

Do votes and comments , your response matters a lot to me.

Love Mehak


  1. Woww manik is really husband goals he is doing so much for Nandini’s happiness 😍😍😍
    I’m so in love with this Manik❤️❤️❤️❤️

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  2. I love whole part but that one was best when Nandini get to know that her Daddy will stay with her because Manik convince him I just love your thoughts Mehak Thank you for writing such a beautiful story I hope that One day I also find some one who Cares for my Mammy Papa Like I Do ❤

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  3. I think manik aapko nandu ko sab kuch bata dena Chahiye kyunki aapki sali sahiba I mean navya ji ne bata diya naa to aap to gaye and maybe aapko aapki angle ka first time worsts wala roop dekhne ko mile ki seriously aap use bata to sakte the phir woh gussa hoti hain Jo bhi hota baad main dekhte seriously I know abhi bhi woh sirf isliye gussa hogi ki Aapne Kuch bataya nahi

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  4. So expected but I don’t know manik was so romantic to hold her hand Infront of every one whoooo but on the serious note I love him so much and musu like seriously so cute yaar woh to bachi hain and bache bahut zidd karte hain

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  5. Manik ko nandini ko sabkuchh Bata Dena chahiye jab ki wo press conference rakh Raha hai to nandini ko waise hi pata chalane hi Wala hai but manik batayega to nandini manik ko support karegi aur khush hogi ki manik ne apni problem uske sath share ki

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  6. Awesomee mindblowing update…
    Uff yeh cabir kab sudrega humesha sabko pareshan karta hai poor nandu iss baar woh shikar hou gayi cabir ke masti ke he told everyone that nandu called mukti as manik and asked when did he become so thin yeh sunkar sablog hasne lage amd manik ko tou chance he mil gaya nandu ko tease karne ka and nandu justrd pouted seeing manik laughing on her…
    Hehe nyo ne cabir ko achese daata by twisting his ear inspite he being in pain and muskan ne uss fire mai ghee daal deya by telling nyo to punish him more as he didnt give muskan chocolate hehe which made everyone laught haha….
    Aww manik is so sweet woh nandu ke liye humesha kuch na kuch special karne ke try karta hai like dat he again planed one more surprise which shocked her the most which was to create the exact same room as her own which made so happy as it showed her that manik loves her soo much and then there kiss was soo hot with full of love and passion…
    Poor muskan uska bunty kho gaya ketna roh rahi thi bcoz she wanted her bunty bt zoya kare bhi tou kya kare she cant go back and bring muskan’s bunty so she tried to bribe her with chocolate ice cream phele muskan ke mouth watering hone lagi after listening to her favourite ice cream bt den she remembered abt bunty n again became sad and ran away….
    Awww manik should get the best husband in the world ka prize just bcoz nandu was worried abt her father manik managed to agree her father to stay with them seeing manik putting so much efforts for happiness made her so mich happy n fall more in love with him bt manik being the naughty soul wanted her to thank him properly which she promised she will before she ran away as manik ka phone baja….

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  7. Hayeeeeee kitnaaa achaaa hay mnk 😍😍😍 aisa hubby sab girl ko milay tou 😍😍😍 nandu is really lucky…just beautiful how mnk taking care of his angle…how cute 💚💚💚 sooo awsmmmm

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  8. Happy to see them happy awesome story mehak reading your all stories weather it is mine , love story, or love or sin all are awesome and are with different story line . I can say that you are a awesome writer and a fabulous editor .

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