Love Or Sin ( Part : 27 A Beautiful Morning)

Manik woke up next morning and widened his eyes in shock as he saw Nandini who was standing in front of him having a bright smile on her face.

“Good morning.” She wished cheerfully, and he sat against the bedrest, rubbing his eyes. He thought, he was seeing a beautiful dream.

“Pinch me.” Suddenly he asked her to pinch him and she narrowed her brows in confusion.

“Pinch me..” he shouted and this time, she pinched his hand lightly and he hissed in pain. She was still looking at him bemusedly.

He held her arms and pulled her toward himself. “Are you in real?” She smiled at him and nodded her head. He smiled broadly and took her in his strong arms. He hugged her so tightly like he wanted to store her in his arms forever. She hugged him back, having a bright smile on her face.

He broke the hug and cupped her face. “I just can’t believe that my star is shining again. I am so happy, Nandini. I got my shining star back. Thank you so much.” His eyes were shining with happiness, seeing his star’s smile. This morning became one of his best mornings. He was happy from his heart after seeing her happy after so many days.

“I am smiling because of you. You’re the only reason that I am smiling again. Your love has given me a new life, Manik. I love you so much.” She confessed and gazed into his eyes deeply.

“I love you more my star.” He kissed her forehead and confessed his love. A lone tear trickled down her cheeks from her eyes. Her ears were craving to hear these three magical words and this moment made her emotional.

“Now no more tears, Nandini. It hurts to see tears in your eyes. Only smile suits you, not tears.” He spoke, nodding his head and wiping her tear softly with his thumb. She smiled at him. He again kissed her forehead and she closed her eyes in response feeling the touch of his lips. Then he kissed her eyelids. By kissing her eyes, he wanted to take away all her sorrow and pain.

“Now you get fresh and until then I will make breakfast ready.” She turned to walk, but he stopped her by holding her hand after getting up from the bed. She looked at him after turning her face toward him.

He turned her toward himself, holding her arms and asked. “Are you really fine ?”

“What do you think ?” She asked looking at him.

“I just.. can’t believe…” he stammered a bit.

“I am completely fine, Manik.” She spoke cutting his words.

“This is the magic of your love which brought me back. I was in shock after what had happened a day before yesterday. I was scared. But now I am not scared because I know you are with me and you will always protect me. Until you are with me, I have no fear. Your eyes are evidence of your love, Manik. I was such a fool to believe you that day when you told me that you don’t love me. I forgot that the eyes never lie. Eyes are the window to the soul. I can read your eyes, Manik. I can see in your eyes that you love me so much. Your love made me strong again. I am not only fine I am very happiest today knowing that you also love me.” She held his hands and poured her heart out in front of him. Both were looking into each other eyes deeply and intensely.

“I am really sorry for hurting you.” He apologised and brought her hands up to his lips. He kissed her knuckles, gazing in her eyes. She smiled at him in response.

She put her hand on his face. “It’s okay. I can understand. I know it would be difficult for you to accept me because our relationship is so complicated. I understand you because it was difficult for me also to accept you. But we lost in front of our destiny and love. Our love won in the end and see we are together. Destiny brought us together.”

She stood on her toes and kissed his cheek and whispered in his ear, “I love you.” He smiled wholeheartedly on her purest confession. She also smiled cheerfully, gazing at him.

“Now get fresh fast because I am starving.” She spoke before walking out of the room. He was smiling, staring at the door from where she had gone out.

He reached in the kitchen after taking a quick shower and a smile touched his lips as he saw his star. She was standing facing her back to him. Her long silky hair was falling on her back. She was wearing his shirt. This moment was very special to him. The girl whom he loved, she was preparing breakfast in his kitchen. He wanted her to prepare breakfast for them like this every day in which he will help her. He wanted to bring her in his house making her his wife. He knew it wouldn’t be easy but one day he would surely make her his wife and bring her in his house forever.

He strolled toward her and held her waist from behind. She was breaking the egg for the omelette, she stopped instantly as his hands held her waist. He nuzzled her hair and inhaled the exquisite scent of her hair. Her lips drew up into bright smile and she closed her eyes. He snaked his one arm around her waist and from his other hand, he gently placed her hair on her one side. Her breath was becoming heavy with every passing second and her heart was racing fast.

As he leaned down and blew the air on her neck, she shivered and clutched the hem of her shirt in response. He pulled down the shirt from her shoulder and kissed down her neck to her shoulder. She felt so good to feel the touch of his lips on her skin. She wanted him to kiss her whole body like this. She was feeling alive with his soothing kisses.

“I want to kiss and love every inch of your body.” He turned her toward himself and whispered, his thumb was brushing her lower lip. “But before that, I want to make you mine.”

“I am all yours, Manik. But I know.. it is complicated. Even I also want to proceed further with you after ending my marriage with Shivansh officially.” They stared into each other silently.

“Do you know, when did I kiss for the first time ?” She asked after a few minutes of silence. He shook his head in response. She smiled at him before saying something.

“My first kiss was with you in the bathroom. I can still feel your lips on mine. The kiss made me feel so good at that time also.” She blushed and her eyelashes moved down.

“Really ?” He was surprised to know that it was her first kiss. She nodded her head in yes, smiling at him. He smiled broadly.

“Yes, because I never fell in love before. You are my first love, Manik. Iss dil ne sirf tumhai chaha hai aur tumhra hi intzar kiya hai (My heart has always loved you and waited for you.) Therefore I never able to proceed further with Shivansh.” Both were smiling at each other and their eyes were shining with happiness. Their fingers were playing with each other.

“One day you told me that your favourite book is ‘Is it love’. Remember?” She asked.

“The book touched my heart. It was so beautifully written.” He nodded his head confusingly not knowing that why she was asking this from him.

“The concept of the story is related to my life. Every word is written in that book was what I used to think. I have cared for Shivansh but somewhere I knew that it wasn’t love. That’s why I never proceeded further with him. My heart never permitted me to love him. I was with him because I don’t want to hurt him. But in this, I forgot about my own happiness. For the first, I am thinking about my happiness, Manik, and my happiness is with you. Am I doing right, Manik ?” She asked, staring at him doubtfully.

“Sometimes thinking about your happiness is not wrong, Nandini. You are so selfless, Nandini, therefore you are thinking that you are doing something wrong. Becoming a bit selfish for your own happiness is not wrong.” He explained her after placing his hand on her face and she closed her eyes to feel the touch of his hand.

“I love you, Nandini.” He confessed before kissing her forehead.

“I love you more, Manik.” She confessed back, smiling at him and gained in his eyes deeply.

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  1. I don’t know why you used caps lock on this part.. It’s hard to read the text on caps lock mode.. But it’s ok.. No problem.. I hope next parts yeisa nahi hai.. 🙃
    Btw, superb update.. Manan is right.. Without telling shivansh about them if they continue their love life then it’ll be sin for sure.. shivansh would be betrayed by them.. They’ll play with his trust.. So saab batake hi aage badhna is good.. 😊 I hope shivansh saab manle aur jayda na tut jaye..

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  2. And another intriguing Update ❤❤❤❤

    Love how story is moving forward revealing slowly and steadily all the moments behind those huge drama, painful moments, guilt n all…

    That is my happy response seeing the update…
    Got an Amazing Update 🙂 Like chapter name dekh kar hi face par smile aa gyi ☺😄😄

    Seriously..

    You always manage to bring a smile on my face by updating such a Lovely n Beautiful chapter..
    What do i say??? I mean….. U take my breath away by ur beautiful writing, u describe pain n Emotion n even Emotional scenes made me Speechless Always..

    Ur an amazing writer n ur work is beyond words of praise..! Ur writing is so simple n i loved it alot.. 😘😘😘

    I really feel connected this story..😍😍😍😍

    Just wanna tell you.. You’re an Fabulous writer.. This story is love and about this part, I guess Nandini is fine she doesn’t seem sad.. ❤❤❤

    Coming to the update..Like chapter start with good notes.. Nandini is happy.. I am happy for her already.. And can feel my Nandini.. I don’t want to see tears in her eyes coz of her bad moment.. And Manik,,, Even though I love u so much, even though I have this heart eyes whenever I see you, even though you are my prince Charming 🙈😍,,, I won’t hesitate smacking your head if any of your actions hurt nandini.. Especially that involves your friendship..

    Nandini ke jaadu se koi nai bach sakta 😍😋
    Loved Manik and Nandu’s early morning lovey dovey Interaction.. Finally manik ne nandini ko uss Bad phase nikal hi liya.. Apne love n care se manik ne miracle kar diya.. One moment nandini ko condition dekh kar laga tha nandini itni jaldi iss pain se bahar nai aayegi but Manik ke pyar ke aage sab possible hai 😍😍…

    Finally manik confessed his love once again nd those three magical words gives her more n more happiness nd that Forehead kiss made her emotional.. But this scene I was so much waiting for this………………. ❤

    At one time manik I agreed wid u,, mujhe bhi laga ki nandini kahi happy hone ka pretend toh nai kar rhi hai at one moment just can't believe but manik ke pure love n care par believe tha..
    Yes eyes speaks everything Like everything.. But nandini koi na vo incidents hone se tm dono ko apne strong love ka happy realization ho gya.. Nai toh dono ek dusre se dur jaane all the time try kar rhe the… Nandini Manik is here toh no Fear.. Just believe n trust his true n pure love ❤😘..

    Yeah I agreed ye sab the part of game of destiny.. But that time the fates are so cruel for Manik but right now fates are happy.. He tried to run away from this since a long time and now his own fate will push him for this… And one day destiny tmahre pyar ko win karegi..Love complicated hote hai but at last win bhi hote hai.. So much peacefully n beautiful scene.. Pure confession nd beautiful cheek 😍😘😗.. And I also smile looking at that beautiful moment.. 😍😍😍

    FEEL AA GYI LITERALLY 😍😍😍

    I loved that scene so much wow no worry manik in future tmhare ye dream bhi complete honge..can't wait till situation is all good to go 😘.. Tough times ahead For the love birds.. Loved their cute moment together.. I know manik one day nandini surely tmhari wife bankar aayegi 😍😍… Finally Manan's romance 🙈🙈 good sign good sign can't wait for more manik nandini moments, before nandini has to go back to shivansh house.. looks like manik and nandini has no plans to go back to normal life.. Kaash aisa hota..

    Thanks for Lil Romance part.. Manan ke romance me feel aati hai 😍🙈
    U written so much beautiful this scene.. He is so happy in front of his nandini..
    Nandini his best life partner…Waahhh Loving this phase so much 😍😍❤❤
    But vo moments kab aayenge 🙈🙈

    Much much needed this scene n lovely moment.. I loved Manik n nandini alot nd thanks for doing justice to her character..i don't know what to say.. It's like I myself is witnessing the entire story is front of me… Specifically your words brings the characters to life..

    I respect your decision manik aise toh tm nandini ke saath kuch bhi kar skte the but no ur such a sweetheart person.. Nd ur so much understanding person aise karne se chaeting bhi ho skti hai.. But I am so much happy right now..

    Oh wow nandini first kiss manik ke sath hui so much happy.. Even I am surprised ki nandini ki first kiss manik ke sth hui coz I remember starting me nandini ne shivansh ko kiss kiya tha but I think it was just a peck not kiss.. Nd nandini starting se shivansh ke sth only life spend kar rhi thi.. Yes she care him a lot but not love him.. I respect her alot.. Coz nandini ne shivansh ki feeling ko hurt nai kiya.. Nd destiny nandini ko manik ke saath dekhna chahti hai toh shivansh se love kaha hoga.. Nd lastly Nandini ki Happiness Manik me hai n Manik ki happiness nandini me hai That's it…

    Yes ur doing absolutely right.. Sometimes apni happiness ke liye bhi selfish hona padta hai.. So apni happiness ke liye tm manik ke saath rehna chahti ho toh koi wrong decision nai hai.. Such a pure n full of love filled relationship.. kind of relief as their conco was so much pleasant..

    I really want to see shivansh response to nandini
    when he gets to know about her and manik love..
    However I thought that now their hardships will end but clearly god has some other plans.. I am sure in the hope that love will win ❤❤❤

    I knew shivansh is trouble! Shivansh presence sure gonna create some interesting events.. Let nandini and manik live and love through it all.. ❤❤

    That was expected!!! You have been hinting towards this from a long time now.. I am waiting to see is how manik reacts to this new equation..
    In my mind.. Nandini might be loving as ever.. Her battle between love and self respect would be interesting.. But have no idea what destiny or our writer is going to do.. Ready to be surprised 🤗🤗🤗

    And let's pray to God to give her all the strength she may need in future.. ☺☺☺

    Lovely beyond measure!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍

    Lot's of love ❤😘

    Love u so much sweetu 😘😘

    Gudiya ❤💋

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  3. beautiful 😍 part want more manan beautiful scene love it ❤️❤️❤️ so beautifully written meri jaan💃🏼❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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  4. “Iradein phir se jane k nahin Lana tumhi aana” ab sab kuch is chahat is ibadat k samne koi insaan koi Shakti nahin tik payegi raasta aasan nahin hain par namumkin nahin waiting for the next part eagerly

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  5. Omg this chapter is really fell like hayyyyyyy it is really love omg omg so amazing hayyyyyyy fell aa gayi manik aap itne romantic kyun hain and most importantly miku 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 tu itni sweet kyun hain Karwa chouth wali felling aa gayi hayyyyyyy

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  6. Awesome update .but i feel really sad for shivansh how will he be when he will come to know this .and about manan.they got their love.but i think their way will not be easy .u have awesome wrtiong skills what to expolre more of it.love of love di.take care

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  7. anyways forget to tell you how awesome the part is.. you r an amazing writer. got back my phone yesterday after three months. here is a mindblowing chapter from you. lots of love 💜

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  8. but I think it wasn’t nandini’s first kiss.. In part – 8, manik accident day’s morning,there mentioned kiss between shivansh and nandini 👀 nandini wanted to forget manik that time

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