Love Story(Part : 71 Poor Manik)

“So here is my Musu.” Zoya walked into Manan room. Manan smiled at her.

“Mumma.. , kya daddy aagye ? Mujhe unhai apni dless dekhani hai.(Did daddy come ? I want to show my dress to him.)” Muskan asked from Zoya.

“Yes Musu , daddy has come and he wanna meet his little princess.”Zoya spoke and Muskan jumped from Nandini’s arms to Zoya excitedly. They all laughed at her.

“Nandini, you are looking so gorgeous in this red saree.” Zoya complimented Nandini and she smiled at her. Manik again got lost in admiring his wife.

“Thank you bhabhi.” Zoya glared at Nandini for calling her bhabhi.

“I mean Zoya.” Nandini immediately corrected herself and both chuckled.

“By the way you are slaying like always in this gown.” Nandini also complimented her and she thanked her.

“Mumma chalo.. daddy wait kal lhai honge. (Mumma let’s go ,daddy will be waiting.)” Muskan yelled holding her mumma chin. Then Zoya walked out with Muskan last time looking at Manan.

As Zoya exited the room, Manik immediately ran toward the door to lock it. He sighed turning toward Nandini after locking the door. He looked at Nandini and found her laughing at him.

“What ? why are you laughing ?” He asked raising his eyebrows and walked toward her.

“I am laughing seeing your desperation for the kiss.” She answered him and chuckled putting hand on her mouth.

He suddenly pulled her toward himself after wrapping his arm around her waist. Their front body collided with each other. She was taken aback with his sudden move. She looked at him resting her hand on his chest. Her breath was becoming heavy because of their proximity.

“What to do ? I never get enough of your delicious lips, angel.” He whispered gazing at her lips while his thumb was brushing her lower lip.

“The more I kiss them , the more I craved for them.” He was moving closer to her lips and still his eyes were gazing at lips and thumb was rubbing her lower lip. Nandini’s heart was beating fast. He was making her crazy.

“Kiss me , Manik.” She whispered near to his lips encircling her arms around his neck. Manik eyes moved from her lips to her eyes. He smiled listening her words. The way she begged from him to kiss her , it turned on him more. She closed her eyes and waited for him to kiss her lips.

Their lips touched each other but they moved away from each other instantly when somebody knocked the door. Manik gave frustrated looks to Nandini. This was the second time , somebody had disturbed them from kissing each other. Nandini chuckled looking at him and went to open the door.

“Mam , your father has come and he is calling you downstairs.” As she opened the door , a maid informed her making her smile broadly.

“I am coming.” She replied her sweetly and the maid left.

“Manik , daddy has come. Let’s go to meet him.” She told him happily turning toward him. Manik nodded his head making a sad pout because now he was not going to get the kiss before the reception party.

“Aww.. baby , don’t be sad.” Nandini said pulling his cheeks.

“I want kiss , angel.” He said like a small kid is asking for the chocolate or toffee and he is not getting it.

“Manik , stop being so cute and come with me , daddy is waiting for us.” She ordered and turned to walk.

“And what about our kiss , angel ?” He asked and stopped her holding her hand.

“When god will want , we will kiss Manik. Now come with me.” She said turning toward him. He sadly nodded his head leaving her hand. She walked toward the door. He walked behind her and his head was hanging down.


“Daddy , I am so happy to know that you are going to live here with us. I was really so tensed for you before.” Nandini hugged her father so tightly as soon as she saw him standing in the hall with Neyoinka and Raj. Manik also reached there and smiled seeing his angel who was so happy. He did all this for her this happiness only. He could do anything for her happiness.

“All credit goes to Manik. You should thank him.”Ram first kissed her forehead and then spoke pointing her eyes toward Manik. Nandini looked at him having smile on her face while he was already smiling at her.

“Thank you Manik.” She thanked him and then walked toward Raj and Neyonika.

“And thank you mom and dad for allowing him to stay with us.” She also thanked them.

Ram could clearly see from her daughter’s face that how much happy she was after getting married. He wished for nothing all his except her daughter’s happiness. His eyes had been yearning since many years to see the happiness of her daughter and like finally god listened to him.

“Now you are our daughter too and anything for your happiness.” Raj spoke stroking her face and Nandini smiled at him.

“We shall leave now. We are already late.” Neyonika said and they all nodded their head. Then she asked one maid to call everybody downstairs.


“Shankar you go. Today , I will drive myself.” Manik’s driver Shankar , he was standing outside of car and waiting them only. Manik said to him walking toward the car with Nandini. Shankar left from there nodding his head and Nandini was looking at him confusingly.

“I will get my kiss on the way , angel.” He whispered in Nandini’s ear and her eyes shot up in a shock. Now she understood that why he gave off to the driver.

“You are crazy.” She spoke and shook her head in a disbelief. He was grinning now looking at her.

“Shall we go ?” He asked and she nodded her head in yes. He opened the door for her and she sat down into the car and he himself sat down on the driver seat. They were putting the belt and Manik was smiling happily because finally he was going to get the kiss.

But his happiness was only for few minutes.

They both looked outside from the window of Nandini side when they heard the sound of knocking.

They saw Muskan who was beating the glass with her tiny hands. She was in the arms of her mother. She passed them a cute smile and they smiled back.

“Chachu and Chachi, musu aaj aap dono sath jaegi. (Today Musu will go with you both.)” As Nandini rolled down the glass , they heard her voice. Manik eyes popped up in a shock. Nandini grinned thinking about the condition of her husband who was dying for the kiss.

“Okay , come.” She said while opening the door.

“Muskan , will you please let your chachu and Chachi kiss each other ?” Manik thought staring at Muskan.

“I am sorry Nandini. She is so stubborn.” Zoya apologised from Nandini while making her sit on Nandini’s lap.

“It’s okay , Zoya. Don’t be sorry.” Nandini spoke and Zoya closed the door smiling at her. Muskan started playing with Nandini’s Mangalsutra which she was wearing around her neck.

“Chachu , ab achai achai songs chala do kuki musu ko song suna bhut pasand hai gadhi mein. ( Chachu , now play awesome music because Musu likes a lot to listen song in the car.)” Muskan said excitedly and Manik smiled at her forcefully before playing the music because from inside his heart was crying. For the first , the cute Muskan was irritating him.

Nandini was laughing covering her mouth with her hand on Manik’s condition. Manik glared at Nandini before starting the car making her laugh loudly. She was finding him so cute at that moment. He was really behaving like a small kid who is not getting her favourite chocolate.

On the other hand Adi got the opportunity to have a car ride with his wife without his daughter after a long time. He was going to take the full advantage this opportunity.

So here is the next. Hope you enjoyed reading this update.

Love Mehak


  1. Wooooo
    U fufilled my little wish here
    That nandu dad staying with MANAN FOREVER 🤭🤭🤭♥️♥️😍😍👌👌👌
    can u introduce a cute LITTLE BOY if musu will be fun
    Seeing musu n that boy cute fights n fun ♥️♥️😍
    Wats say 🤭🤭😅😅😅😅

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  2. Hahahahahah pooorrrrr manikkkk adi got opportunity and manik does not have opportunity so sad of him 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 will he get his kiss writerjii why u made my manik sad I hate u for this 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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  3. Awww bechara mnk baba 😁😁😁 but meko bara maja aya ay payeri rukawat se 😂😂 but mnk apna kam adhura nhi chorega for sure….lovely update mehku ☺☺

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  4. Bechara manik par hume ye bhi pta agar manik kuch chahe toh vo le hi leta hai 🤭 . So waiting to see how manik will get his kiss 😘🤭 . Amazing and cute update mehak 😘

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